My country song "Why do you haunt me" critique
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Spencer Stone
Why do you haunt me
(Verse 1)
I travel alone down
a broken road ever since you left
only God knows how
I've made it this far without you there
I can't help but look for you
where you lay your head
But I get on somehow
without you in this bed
my nights are cold now
though I can still feel your hands on my chest
I wake up and reach for you
cause my heart can't find rest
(Bridge)
it's like I feel you
here with me
but you're gone
and I'm asking please
(chorus)
why do you haunt me
your visions dance within my dreams
your spell is on me
letting go is harder than it seems
my soul is locked inside your love
you still hold the key
I need you to set me free
why do you haunt me
(Verse 2)
it's been soo long now
since I've felt your gentle touch
with all the pain I hold from losing you
one drink is never enough
to wash away our plans and dreams
and all the times we made love
I know you never meant to leave me baby that's why it hurts soo much
(chorus)
why do you haunt me
your visions dance within my dreams
your spell is on me
letting go is harder than it seems
my soul is locked inside your love
and you still hold the keys
I need you to set me free
why do you haunt me.. yeah
why do you haunt me
why do you haunt me
why do you haunt me
3 years ago
Why do you haunt me
(Verse 1)
I travel alone down
a broken road ever since you left
only God knows how
I've made it this far without you there
I can't help but look for you
where you lay your head
But I get on somehow
without you in this bed
my nights are cold now
though I can still feel your hands on my chest
I wake up and reach for you
cause my heart can't find rest
(Bridge)
it's like I feel you
here with me
but you're gone
and I'm asking please
(chorus)
why do you haunt me
your visions dance within my dreams
your spell is on me
letting go is harder than it seems
my soul is locked inside your love
you still hold the key
I need you to set me free
why do you haunt me
(Verse 2)
it's been soo long now
since I've felt your gentle touch
with all the pain I hold from losing you
one drink is never enough
to wash away our plans and dreams
and all the times we made love
I know you never meant to leave me baby that's why it hurts soo much
(chorus)
why do you haunt me
your visions dance within my dreams
your spell is on me
letting go is harder than it seems
my soul is locked inside your love
and you still hold the keys
I need you to set me free
why do you haunt me.. yeah
why do you haunt me
why do you haunt me
why do you haunt me
3 years ago
Spencer Stone
Sorry about that. I really wanted to upload the whole song. But, I can't figure out what is wrong. I keep getting an error. File extension (601). But, here are my lyrics
3 years ago
James C. Taylor
I had to use a link to the song. I use songspace.com. You can create a link.
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