Please critique my lyrics. Country song "The Redneck Zone"
"The redneck zone"
(1st verse)
yeah it’s time to get my redneck on
I’m headed back to where I belong
wheels keep a rollin
I know where I’m goin
I’m about to get real gone
city life breakin my mind
I can’t wait to hit the county line
when I get back home
in the redneck zone
it’s gonna be on tonight
yeah... if you wanna find me
(chorus)
look for the bonfire light
that burns so bright
it’s like the sun is a risin
tell all your friends
to climb on in
get the beer
and kick the four wheel drives in
bring all them honeys along
drop the tailgates down
make yourselves at home
if you’re looking for a backwoods party come on
step into the
redneck zone
(backup singers)
ya get ta steppin
when ya step in
step into the red neck zone
ya get ta steppin
when ya step in
step into the red neck zone
(verse)
I know we all know
where to go
to get it started
I know we all know
how to roll
up in a party
I know we all know
when it’s on
up in a party
when we’re livin it up
and we’re lettin it out
we just wanna have fun
with a redneck crowd
(chorus repeat)
look for the bonfire light
that burns so bright
it’s like the sun is a risin
tell all your friends
to climb on in
get the beer
and kick the four wheel drives in
bring all them honeys along
drop the tailgates down
make yourselves at home
if you’re looking for a backwoods party come on
step into the
redneck zone
(backup singers)
ya get ta steppin
when ya step in
step into the red neck zone
ya get ta steppin
when ya step in
step into the red neck zone
yeah the redneck zone
(verse)
time to get my redneck on
now I know that I can’t go wrong
cause all my kin and redneck friends
are here to party all night long
let’s get ta steppin.. on
(chorus repeat)
look for the bonfire light
that burns so bright
it’s like the sun is a risin
tell all your friends
to climb on in
get the beer
and kick the four wheel drives in
bring all them honeys along
drop the tailgates down
and make yourselves at home
if you’re looking for a backwoods party come on
step into the redneck zone
(backup singers)
ya get ta steppin
when ya step in
step into the red neck zone
ya get ta steppin
when ya step in
step into the red neck zone
oh it’s on
yeah the redneck zone
it’s on it’s on it’s on it’s on
when ya step into the redneck zone
hey y’all
come on let’s go
let’s go have a good time
back in the redneck zone
It's always on
aw yeah haha
Replies
James C. Taylor
I think you should introduce the redneck zone at the end of the first verse and plug it in more often through out the song. Very good start but really bring home the red neck zone as often as you can.
3 years ago
Spencer Stone
Thanks for your reply. I appreciate it. Hopefully I can figure out how to upload the music on this site. So far, nobody has replied, when I ask for help
3 years ago
Matthew Busa
Needs a bridge. 8 bars. Drums & bass. Spoken. Not sung. Describe what’s going on around the campfire or something like that. This guy goes with that girl. This girl with another. Thank god she’s looking at me. Type a thing.
3 years ago