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Scott Porterfield
There is a lot of good here. Your structure is solid too. An opening verse and chorus that work well together. I would suggest you keep going with it though as it needs a scond verse and perhaps lyrics for a bridge or "middle 8" as they also call it.
The second verse and possibly third verse is a chance for you to tell more of the story of why she is the way she is.... so the listener can be pulled in and want to follow the story.
Hope this helps! 8 years ago
The second verse and possibly third verse is a chance for you to tell more of the story of why she is the way she is.... so the listener can be pulled in and want to follow the story.
Hope this helps! 8 years ago
