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Just joined today looking for people to collaborate with as i am not a musician but rather the poet or writer
i would consider most of my writings country which tell a story if you are that musician please contact me
here is a sample of one of my songs
GRANDPAS PLACE I
VERSE 1
WAY BACK OFF THE BLACKTOP DOWN A DUSTY DIRT ROAD STANDS A ONE ROOM POOL HALL WHERE ME AND GRANDPA USED TO GO
YOU SEE THERE WASN'T MUCH TO DO IN THOSE HOLLOWS AT NIGHT SO WE'D SIT ON THE PORCH UNTIL THE HOUSE...Good Evening
Just joined today looking for people to collaborate with as i am not a musician but rather the poet or writer
i would consider most of my writings country which tell a story if you are that musician please contact me
here is a sample of one of my songs
GRANDPAS PLACE I
VERSE 1
WAY BACK OFF THE BLACKTOP DOWN A DUSTY DIRT ROAD STANDS A ONE ROOM POOL HALL WHERE ME AND GRANDPA USED TO GO
YOU SEE THERE WASN'T MUCH TO DO IN THOSE HOLLOWS AT NIGHT SO WE'D SIT ON THE PORCH UNTIL THE HOUSE WENT QUITE
THEN WE'D FIRE UP HIS TRUCK STIR UP SOME DUST SNEAK OFF TO THE POOL HALL HUSTLE UP
A FEW BUCKS
WELL I GOT PRETTY GOOD WITH THAT STICK IN MY HAND AND WHEN GRANDPA PASSED I LEFT TOWN
MEMPHIS, VEGAS, RENO, L.A. BY THE TIME I WAS TWENTY -ONE THAT STICK WAS PAYING MY WAY
BUT I NEVER FORGOT ALL THAT GRANDPA HAD SAID IT HAD GOTTEN ME THIS FAR TURNED ME INTO A MAN
CHORUS
YEA GRANDPA ALWAYS TOLD ME LOOK A MAN IN THE EYE ,YOUR HANDSHAKE'S WORTH MORE THAN ANYTHING THAT YOU'VE GOT
NEVER CHEAT AT THE GAME PAY YOUR DEBTS ,KEEP YOUR EYE ON THE BALL AND CHALK ON YOUR HANDS
ALWAYS RESPECT THE ONES YOU MEET ,KEEP YOUR MIND IN THE GAME SEE THE SHOT AND BELIEVE
SAVE SOME WINNINGS FOR ANOTHER DAY CAUSE THIS WANT LAST FOREVER HUSTLING'S A YOUNG MANS GAME, NO THIS WANT LAST FOREVER ITS A YOUNG MANS GAME
VERSE 2
SO I HEADED HOME IN NINETY -EIGHT BOUGHT THAT OLD POOL HALL CALLED IT GRANDPAS PLACE
I BLEW OUT THE WALLS PUT THE DANCE FLOOR IN , A FEW MORE TABLES JUST LIKE WE HAD PLANNED
AND NOW THAT OLD TABLE WE USED TO PLAY SITS UP FRONT IN A ROPED OFF SPACE AND ON FRIDAY NIGHTS AFTER EVERYONE LEAVES I RACK UP ONE LAST GAME FOR GRANDPA AND ME
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