"Posting my song for feedback" This one has a nice opening. I like the dissonance of the backing track.
Each layer you added musically was a little more tension which worked...
For those looking to learn about the business side of songwriting, we're beginning a class called SONGWRITING BASICS: THE BUSINESS. It's in its early stages yet so, in the meantime, if you'd like to jump in and start promoting your songs online, here's something that can help: