"Posting my song for feedback"
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James Porterfield
This one has a nice opening. I like the dissonance of the backing track.
Each layer you added musically was a little more tension which worked well against the lyric.
I liked the pure chorus here. This song feels more mature in its structure.
Again I would really like to see the lyric to this. But overall this is a good, tightly-structured song. 8 years ago
Each layer you added musically was a little more tension which worked well against the lyric.
I liked the pure chorus here. This song feels more mature in its structure.
Again I would really like to see the lyric to this. But overall this is a good, tightly-structured song. 8 years ago
