James PorterfieldI like your voice on this! The guitar could be a bit smoother, but that will come with repitition of performance.
The song has a decent structure with a bridge and progressive build melodically that matches the lyrical build-up. Overall this is very nice and shows a lot of promise as a writer.8 years ago
Merrilee JonesHi Lilla, I like the way you phrase the lyrics with your voice, and your voice is well-suited to this song. Very good. I liked the song.7 years ago