"Posting my song for feedback" This one has a nice opening. I like the dissonance of the backing track.
Each layer you added musically was a little more tension which worked...
I'm a first time lyricist looking for some guidance and also some collaboration with an experienced country composer. I have a couple songs in progress, but the one I'm most excited about would be for a male vocalist in a country style.
I'm in the OH/PA area, but willing to work via web contact if necessary.