"Posting my song for feedback" This one has a nice opening. I like the dissonance of the backing track.
Each layer you added musically was a little more tension which worked...
James C. TaylorSo you want to go out and dance and she doesn't like to go clubbing. Sounds like a convincing declaration. I bet she goes. movement in the story. Great background vocals. All I here is potential.6 years ago
James PorterfieldThere is definite potential. My advise would be that focus on establishing clear parts to the song would be nice... Find the A, B and C parts and keep returning to the A or B for the familiarity. Sort of a "home base."6 years ago