"Posting my song for feedback" This one has a nice opening. I like the dissonance of the backing track.
Each layer you added musically was a little more tension which worked...
When you smiled you said no ones ever picked a wild rose for me before. I don't usually speak to people on the street. I don't know how that wild rose broke through to me today.
Yet here we are two wild roses in our own garden with our own sunshine and rain. Now you cross the lines. I break the rules. Here we are living on the fringes. Two dreamers in the same dream.
Two wild roses two wild roses,,, two wild roses same minded, heart binded love blinded then winded too tight bu.t that.s all right. We're Outside the liners golden heart miners two wild roses amidst tall towers. Two wild roses two wild roses so glad we found a wild rose and became two wild roses,,, two wild roses two wild roses.
James PorterfieldAgain I really like the lyric here, but the melody feels a bit rambling. Perhaps I am just not following it well with the edits. But still, the lyric is really nice.6 years ago
James C. TaylorRambling, I completely understand what you're saying . Thanks much.6 years ago